Rafiraf7642's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mahdiva]

RADICAL

[Market]

Now I am jealous. This is just so good. The angry fish in the toga is really cute and expressive. The elf girl looks nice, seems like a miner or archer, looking at a- is that a phone? Seems like a fantasy and sci-fi world. The fish guy looks really awesome. And there's a variety of fruit and veg, including a bomb. 5 stars.

[Oni Fighter]

Nice OC

[Rebirth]

Awesome

[S h a k c h u n n i]

This is good! I love the lower part of the Shari. The green skin tone also (what's that word?) says what you wanted to show.

[Ganesha]

Ganesh on Christmas.
KALI RIIISE.
RIIIIISE THE GODDESS KALI.(Ink)
But srsly, I like the art style. KUTGW.

theRai responds:

Thanksalot! And thanks for the reviews!

[O⩌O]

What can I say anyway?

[f a k e d e e p]

sexual

theRai responds:

Umm nah

[Zombie girl or something idk]

It seems that you have improved. But make the nose closer to the eyes or vice versa to get a girly look cos the face looks boy-ish(Kinda spanish).

[2020OK]

I don't know if you will be angered by the 4 stars but I am a serious critic, unlike other people. The first mistake I found is the left arm pocket. It is at the bottom corner, and looks more like a hole than a pocket. You did not define the pocket much. I like your enthusiasm in using textures but they look like they were copy pasted. They need a realistic folded look. And next up is the chin. WHERE THE FUCK IS THE CHIN!? The hair looks nice but looks more like a lego block mixed with clay. The font of 2020 and those gray stuff in the background is what I like the most. And last, and the worst of all, you defined much shadows on one side of the jacket but it is drastically low at the other side.

theRai responds:

Thanks for the detailed review! This was drawn after a long-ish break, so there are a lot of mistakes, I confess. The chin thing is because of this new simplistic style I'm trying out, somewhat inspired by Iasmin Omar Ata. The textures are also a result of that.
I'll definitely keep your review in mind and try to improve. Wish me luck!